Although you have made some progress on the blog since the last feedback, I don't think you are putting in enough time outside of class to ensure that it is as comprehensive as possible. I was expecting to see your artist's institutional context and research into the kind of album artwork which is typical of the genre. Although there were issues finishing off your timeline, I would also like to see some evidence of the timeline/visualisations, even if they were not complete.
James
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